Full of Flowers

I believe that life is a gift.
That of like a flower both
Shedding and growing
Petal by petal.
In the beginning or in the end,
It could still turn out to be beautiful.
Though the original path has changed,
It could still turn out to be
Totally unexpected
And sometimes
Change is for the good.
 

Reviews

[Sydney]

i really like this poem. its short and meaningful. good job

[Dominic Rosales]

very good comparison, I agree with you on this poem, this is good, short sweet, to the point, and makes a point. Good job, keep it up

[visions of doom]

life is a gift and is made for the living , sometimes circumstances dictate that some lives will be shorter than others but if we have used that life wisely and enter into forever with a happy loving heart , then life becomes eternal . petals may fall but in turn they will provide the nutrient that keeps the root of the plant strong and the rose will bloom once again . let love always be your rose .
delightful poem ,

[John Morris]

This is short and wonderful.

Your right change is unexpected and that although sometimes bad like someone dying it could change for life for the better

A good pen