Mindless

 I truely despise the way your mind thinks and sees,
you are just like a lock,useless, because there is no key.

Author's Note

I am pretty sure you can understand what I am getting at by comparing a mind to a lock with no key.

Reviews

[Dianah]

What a brilliant short poem, Lindsay. I loved it.

[Colton Bose]

Two lines long, yet those two lines contain more power and beauty than some writers could ever achieve in writing a thousand words or more. Very, very well done.

[deeps]

Straight and to the point
I like it so much said and such a few words

[Domo]

wow, to be honest, you just summoned up something that would take me 10 lines to describe, into to very mind settling lines. Great job, and yes, I do understand. ☺