Fly with you

Your smile catches my eye

in the darkest of night 

and brightest of day.

It takes me a new level

of a natural high.

Our hands are connecting 

as we lay there intertwined.

It is these moments that allow us to fly.

Reviews

[Stammers]

You've done a lot with a few short lines, nice.

[Tariq]

I have the image of green fields with me walking hand in hand with my beloved one.

Thanks for beautiful feeling.

[Emilee Grimm]

I love the way you can describe feelings between two people so simply. sometimes simplicity is the way to go :) nice job!!!

[Joshua Donahue]

really uplifting when caught in the moment! i loved this piece! :)

[Just Charles]

Such a good poem about simplicity. Love its length.

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"Our hands are connecting
as we lay there intertwined.
It is these moments that allow us to fly."
...this is a great line and a wonderful poem...:-)

J:)

[J.Black]

Mmmm dreams eh. The natural high. I love it. Full of imagery.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Good. You put so much into so small a poem. I luv it.

[Jonathan Ballam]

beautiful! before I read this I almost forgot what it was like to be in love.

Thanks for this gentle and vivid reminder.