Wishing on Seeds

The life of a seed is a peculiar one.

It sprouts into a gentle twig

and then grows into a tree

where many think the life is done.

That tree expands its' life into branches,

which further arises into leaves.

With the help of plentiful sun 

the tree breathes.

Trees bring hope, which is what I need.

They live life to live not to lead.

That's how it should be.

Which is why I wish on seeds.

Reviews

[FireFly15]

Such an interesting point of view. It show that you are very observant and you like to just stop and take a look at the world.

Very nicely done, 100/100

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a beautiful, lifting write that speaks to the mind and spirit. To take us from the seed, something so small that grows into a tree giving us shade, and then to you and your life.. influence growing. Wonderful poetry!

[Joshua Donahue]

this totally reminded me of Spring and when i read this, i can definitely see the seed growing in my head into a big tree!!! truly remarkable! and the concept was amazing! i think this is one of your best! :)