unwanted part 1

keep your freind close but your enemey closer but how do you know the difference

Your my closest freind

or so I thought

the illusion strike again

why am I so easily fooled

your image never leaves my mind

haunting my for all eternity

anyone else would be expected but why you

the closer you get is the father you push away

I've told you things that noone should know

you just passed me by

leaveing me to wounder

did you ever care

I tould my life story

but do you know anything about me

I'd ask to go back in time

but could I bare a secound scar on my heart

just for a breif a moment of happines and have it taken away

so fragile am I

I want so bad to just leave you alone

but each day I go

the harder it is to breath

 

 

Author's Note

I have not been writting in a while so wording kindda childish
P.S longest poem I ever wrote

Reviews

[Pikachu]

It's not the wording man it's the emotion placed in the words that give it it's meaning. I know what it feels to want to pull away from a now distant friend yet it seems impossible to pull away. No matter how far you get you end up confused where you're back where you started just an exhausting cycle

[Miles Evens]

its not childish at all man its really good
kudos :)