(1.)Succubus (2.)Incubus

(1.)

 

I am breathless,

My lungs ache and plead to breathe

But are unable until i can feel your kiss

Until I breathe you in

And swallow you down inside of me

You tease,

Touch and retreat

Until i tremble with barely suppressed urgency

Anticipaction rises,

It burns my lips like liquid heat

And I feel breathless with it

My deperation rises, fills me completely

Till I am nothing,

A creature of passion, desire, need

I need your lips agains mine

Against all of me

And finally, you lower your face,

Depthless black eyes meeting the glass green of mine

Lips touching tentatibely,

Whisper light

I need more.

You feel my desperation,

The kiss becoming a thing born of burning passion and need,

Your silky-slick tounge dancing with mine

Now I can breathe again

My lungs expanding to take in all of you

For you are the fire that lights my passion,

The wind that whispers songs in my heart

The breath that gives me life.

You are my immortality,

Everlasting.

I lose myself in you,

In your touch,

Your taste,

Your smell.

I forget myself.

I am taking too much,

And you try to pull away,

But my restraint snaps like a worn rope,

Leaving a monster in what was once my own skin.

My control is shot,

My inner-demon set free,

And with this final note, my dear,

I take the last of life from thee.

 

 

(2.)

 

I am breathless,

My lungs ache and plead to breathe

But are unable until i can feel your kiss

Until I breathe you in

And swallow you down inside of me

You tease,

Touch and retreat

Until i tremble with barely suppressed urgency

Anticipaction rises,

It burns my lips like liquid heat

And I feel breathless with it

My deperation rises, fills me completely

Till I am nothing,

A creature of passion, desire, need

I need your lips agains mine

Against all of me

And finally, you lower your face,

Depthless black eyes meeting the glass green of mine

Lips touching tentativley,

Whisper light

I need more.

You feel my desperation,

The kiss becoming a thing born of burning passion and need,

Your silky-slick tounge dancing with mine

Now I can breathe again

My lungs expanding to take in all of you

For you are the fire that lights my passion,

The wind that whispers songs in my heart

The breath that gives me life.

You are my immortality,

Everlasting.

I lose myself in you,

In your touch,

Your taste,

Your smell.

I forget myself.

I lose myself in you.

Reviews

[Jack Frost v.2]

absolutely loved it, very fast and sensual, great job!-
jack

[Sara Searchefield (The ..]

Why must we always want what we can't have? Why must we be so crave driven?
Good job displaying feelings most humans feel...

Sara Seay

[Gandré]

Hello Nina,

thank you for taking time and reading my poem Colors.

your words are appreciated !!

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this is a passionate, ultra fast moving picture. It is like a movie with many flashed pictures. I liked " Depthless black eyes meeting the glass green of mine" and "The wind that whispers songs in my heart" ... wonderful write. thanks for sharing with us. be well !

[LaylaLutz]

This is awesome. I love the repetitions. The flow is fast and fantastic and it's very sensual. Great stuff!