Where are you love?

Love, I do not know you

though I've seen you before

Your the baby's laughter

The old couple next door

the rain when the sun shines

tears amid death

But you have yet to find me

so I wonder whats next

 

I am slow motion

While the world wildly spins

Will my love find me

shackled somewhere within

Can you hear my cry

My desperate plea

Hurry I'm dying alone

Alone without thee

PB 6/1/08

Reviews

[Windy]

So full of feeling, such yearning, you did a super job here. Though it's once again sad it is also hopeful. I escpecially liked the first six lines, very poetic.

[Rain]

This is a sad piece. There's so much sincere longing in it. You did a great job of painting "The wait." It will come. Rain..