too blind to see

So little time so many men

I had 'em, let'em fall through my hands

Thought love was found

between those knees

didnt know your heart

was all I'd need

twenty years, I've learned a lot

men only care about that one spot

till I saw your tears

and misunderstood

there was something more

under the hood

PB 6/24/08

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

I am very insulted by this particular piece! It is not just about one spot. One thing maybe, but definitely not just one spot!

All men are dogs, but we are different breeds....

edit- please note, the above was meant to be humorous - a failed attempt at sarcasm in regards to how many men are just like that

[Poetic Injustice]

It's true ... it's true. Men have feelings too. Thanks. Good write.