Collections of Thoughts This Day

No matter the words I spill

No matter my senses Ill

No matter what I feel

It will happen despite me.

PB 6/21/08

 

 

Y I try

I don’t know why

Tears I cry in vain

I wish to feel your lips touch mine

And still I am insane

when they do

Tis not U

Only me 2 blame

Its not magic anymore

that’s 4 sure

our minds R not the same

WR 6/21/08

 

 

I want to love you, I do

And I love you, I do

Nothing

When we touch

Nothing

When we kiss

I miss you when your gone

Then I am alone

But passion is my wish

Desire in your kiss

A touch that is bliss

Instead there’s only this

PB 6/21/08

 

 

 

 

In my dreams there is a man

That hears me when I speak

Holds me when I’m weak

Shows the passion that I seek

In my dreams there is a man

With a little extra cash

Likes to mow the grass

Takes out the trash

Without having to ask

In my dreams there is a man

That likes me just for me

Wants to be a we

And all that I can see

PB

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[octane143]

This is the low of a relationship. It is chocked full of emotion, wishing and hopes. That "grown-up" love we may have but we question is it enough? My thoughts raced and I thought back to love I threw away because it wans't "perfect". Is the man before you the man you also long for? Is he one in the same your just so blinded by the normalcy of it all you don't see it?...
Wait that's me! See what your poems do? You are an amzing writer, it's refreshing and I'm not gonna make it through work tomorrow if I keep reading your amazing poems. Man! Why'd I throw it away? why are you doing this to me? (lol)

[C.T. Bailey]

Wow. That's straight from the heart. I like how you can see the progression of emotion building from piece to piece. It is very linear. What an outpouring of desire. Very nicely written.
Todd