Don't Call Me Baby

Make love to me I asked him

He looked away

Baby I need you

C’mon baby I gotta work in the morning

He turned his back to me

I snuggled close to his back

It’s hot now baby slide over

Don’t call me baby I ain’t your baby!

Whats wrong with me ?
How many times are you gonna say no?

Isn’t this thing a little backward!!!!

Don’t call me baby !

 

Is that what you call your maid?

8/11/08

Reviews

[octane143]

I like this one! It's cynical and angry and I love the way the roles are reversed!

[The Mad Prophet]

Well written, and well expressed. This was painted in pain, that blares across this poem easily. Great job.

[Mysty Rayn]

This is great. I can't explain why I love it, but I love it.

[Lyrical Love]

Power packed...BABY!! -smile-