Scared

 

 

 

 

 

 

I cant stop thinking about you

I let you touch my heart

I ran when I felt your fingers

 

I wish I hadn't now

but what would I do

If I did have you

 

Im scared

scared I'll never feel that again

 

I wish you would contact me

tell me

you felt something too

 

I cant stop thinking about you

I let you touch my heart

I ran when I felt your fingers

PB 8/28/08

Reviews

[Brittany Bostic]

Great! I think that something to improve would be changing cant to "can't". I liked the repetition.

[octane143]

goosebumps! Wow you have an amazing way of bringing my memories and emotions right to the surface. It's fear, at least for me. I am undeserving of the good things and then I beat myself up because I run. I'm nothing if not predictable!

[Adrian K. Smith]

For me it took place on a snow covered hill. It was a hug not held long enough and the words not said. This is a haunting memory. I hate reading pieces like this, not because they are bad - no, quite to the contrary, this is perfect. It just takes me back to that painful moment and my biggest regret...

[distefano 401]

very thoughtful. i liked the first line and how you repeated it at the ending.