Tattooed Illusion

 

Zzzzzzt ... Zzzzzt ...

The closest to a pain...

Unspoken pleasure.

Zzzzzzt ... Zzzzzt ...

I kept doing it

To prove

I was in control...

Zzzzzzt ... Zzzzzt ...

Now I need it,

But really

... I can stop anytime ...

First it's the

SePeRaTiOn of the sKiN....

Then the heat gLoWs

From the inside....

Soon the invisible is

A RED MESS.

Do I stop it or urge it on?

StAiNeD sKiN

Takes over....

The surface performs the

Ultimate illusion....

<<<RELIEF>>>

Reviews

[C.J.]

nice write red mess in red i wonder what it could be? nice end:)

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

Interesting write. At the end the change of color doesn't take away from the poem but adds to it. The Zzzzt Zzzzt lets the reader go to a place where they are in the tattoo shop getting the tattoo. The sound is kind of like a texture, you can hear the need but also kind of feel the vibrations on your skin. They do say getting a tattoo is addictive.