What an interesting idea - you just may have discovered the cure for writer's block. There were several combinations in this that worked together quite cleverly. Just out of curiosity, is the title taken from words out of a mag too, or did you decide on the title after you had written this?
- M
Interesting result...reminds me of some poems I put together long ago that were just isolated portions of sentences from personal letters. It works out well if you can develop a focus for the whole thing.