A Dream of Love

 

A man

I once knew

Led me to

Compassion ...

Eluding false security.

Hope brought him back

To live in

My unconsciousness;

Haunting me with

Thoughts of happiness ...

Leaving me with

A reality of

Loneliness,

Releasing time I

Once needed with him.

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

Once again I really liked this one too. It seems I like all of your writings so far.
This part really stood out to me:
"Eluding false security.
Hope brought him back
To live in
My unconsciousness;"
It sounds as though he is gone but still lives in your head which is something I can relate to which made this poem so interesting to me.

-Elissa

[C.J.]

i liked the whole poem till the last three linds youl have to explain them to me a little.