Rotten Comfort

                                       Squabbling among 

                                                the joyous excrement

                                                          of yesterday,

                                  I still seek perfection

                                           through the aroma

                                                        of a rotten past,

                                    rancid and barking

                                                     and

                                             rancid and barking,

                                   while foreign moments craved to

                                                                         seduce the lover...

Author's Note

Photo courtesy of seduce of Deviant Art.

Reviews

[Bluefire]

It tells of someone trying to get over a past relationship and start anew.
I like the way it's worded and that it tells a story in just a few lines.
Well done. ^^

[Tai Ryens]

The funny thing is that I don't even recall writing this one, aha. Thank you.

[Bluefire]

Strange o.o
I can hear Twilight Zone music.
XD No problem.

[Baby Ricochet]

Tai my boy you still got it. I got it to but I gotta go get Antibiotics for it.

Great write

[Tai Ryens]

Thanks.

[Pax]

"still seek perfection through the aroma of a rotten past"
~ wow Tai my friend... the title hook me as well as the strong words... a darker side of love you enjoyed so much.... as if you know it was not meant to be you still indulged and missed those times.... awesome!

[Tai Ryens]

Ironic as it is, this is one of my pieces not inspired by love . . . Though my diction always suggests my pieces are.
Thank you.