Behind Glass

Scarlet drips around me,

whispering echoes 

bouncing concrete walls

I constructed around me;

glass telescopes 

operated from

terminals, so that

I could conceptualize

living.

You, oh, so, intriguing

figure, stared into my glass eyes,

innocence flaring beneath

glancing pupils,

a meticulous churn

of my stomach,

a joyous leap while I

prepared to stroll

outside,

just,

as,

you,

asked,

“Is this all there is?”

Author's Note

Haven't wrote in awhile..
Photo courtesy of LeoRiq of Deviant Art.

Reviews

[Bluefire]

I like this one, it's very unique and stunning. Fast paced, reading it was almost like dancing really fast from word to word.
Very well done!

[Tai Ryens]

I believe that was my style at the time, haha :) Thanks, Blue!

[Bluefire]

No problem! ^^

[Baby Ricochet]

I really like the glass telescopes part. Good write Tai. Check out the wc writer willow if you get the chance. Her style reminds me a bit of you