Immense Resentment

Curse every linguistic

Spoken by your tongue;

I hope you choke to death

Without a breath in your lungs.

Have you not heard me?

I told you to go suffocate;

For the mere thought of you,

Brings me endless emotions of hate.

You are worthless,

That's all you will ever be;

No one truly loves you, and

You are of no value to me.

Some may ask why I 

Show this person no affection;

But how is it possible that I could be kind,

When this poem is dedicated to my very own reflection?

Reviews

[stars are far]

Thats very sad but i can relate to it now.. because its exactly how i feel but this is rhymed..
so its better than I.. you did a well done job.
3 years passed so i guess you are now better :)

[Tai Ryens]

A-ha. I hope you're able to recover from it soon, self-loathing can be a destructive little thing.
I wish you well. Thanks for stopping by.

[demureminds]

The ending was unexpected, but very clever. Flow was great as usual, and great job at conjuring up so many emotions.

[Rhea752]

your ending is brilliant great job :)

[Lina Grey]

Well, Tai, like the others before me, I found that ending to be a surprising twist. Very powerful and full of, well, immense resentment. the titlie is quite appropriate. An incredible write. Thank you.

[The Scholar]

Dang, the twist ending was brilliant! Half way through I was caught up thinking, wow, who could this guy hate so incredibly much?? Tricky...
Extremely well written, with a masterful rhyme scheme. Great work here.
Don't be too harsh on yourself, man. :)

[Michael G.]

Your ending is very strong and dramatic.
Well written Ryan.
The rhyme scheme you used helped the flow of this piece a lot.
Keep at it, man!

[nigrum homonculus]

YOU FLIPPED IT! i was like "oh damn this must be about an ex" but the ending completely caught me off guard. well done! what a bloody good poem!