I'm Yours

Some forms of love cannot be understood.

I long for the way you used to make me feel,
How you convinced me that nothing exists;
The time we danced in the lonely darkness,
The way you stole air from my lungs with a kiss.

 

I will be yours but you will never be mine,
That is the way it is supposed to exist for eternity;
Not a soul can ever comprehend this relationship,
And how it could have me leaping with glee.

 

Many wonder how I could stand such madness,
Claiming that what I do is a mistake;
But my love for you will always be overwhelming,
And my soul is yours, not to share with me,..
                                                         But to take.

Author's Note

Could anyone spot who my character has a love for?

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Someone unobtainable to your for the time being presumably...., your yearning repect shines through. Kind of leaves the reader to comprehend and visualise their own projections, which is indicative of what I have read of your writing thus far, a healthy element of mystery exists in your writing, well done young man.

[Tamelia Jade]

... Death? Haha what a great poem :) I loved the flow of this. The first few lines were my favourite though:
I long for the way you used to make me feel,
How you convinced me that nothing exists;
The time we danced in the lonely darkness,
The way you stole air from my lungs with a kiss.
I love the way you described the love, because I think you captured it perfectly and you continued it and kept it consistent. It was very engaging and so real :) Thanks for a great poem! :)