it'dbenicetobewithyougain

A Poem by Jovilious

You're leaving?

~~Please don't go~~

~~dont leave me alone~~

~~alone like everyone else does~~

~~please stay~~

~~stay here with me~~

~~stay~~

it was nice to see you

we should do this again?

© 2019 Jovilious

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Xuannu5810

*I want to stay*
*Ask me to stay*
*I don’t want to leave*
*I don’t want to be alone*
*Please, Ask*
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Yeah, we should.

Posted 6 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

lol it took me a minute to understand what this review meant but i got it :))

nice

Shoshana

interesting!!! OMG I love how you write! You are sooo deep! Unbelieveable. Wow. so beautifully written.

do u mind if i ask if u could write more of that little story that has Lydia point of view??

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 4, 2019
Last Updated on September 4, 2019

Author

Jovilious

There is an ocean of silence between us; and I am drowning in it, OR

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