to much to ask

your smile

is brighter than the sun

so blind me

let us become one

heart's been searching for you

it has not been an easy rode for me

and i know you too

i would give up anything you asked

for your love

your laugh keeps the world spinning 

there is nothing more important 

than keeping you happy

i hope that one day

you may feel that

my eyes are the only things 

worth looking into

is that too much to ask for?

Reviews

[Shoshana]

this is truly one of a kind poem. the real sensation here brings out the brightness in it. love is a dangerous yet beautiful game worth taking the risk. we all fall down sometimes but its never too late to get back up. i feel like ale will love u deary. he will come around ok? take care
-shoshana