why does everything fall apart?

Why does everything fall apart

Things go away from the start

And with every step you take

More and more will break,

 

You try to hold it

But it turns to ash

And now your hands are smeared

With the troubles of your past,

 

Things start to shatter

As if made from glass

And you feel desperate

Because nothing will last,

 

Everything’s broken

You dreams are lost

Things might go back to normal

Those things might cost.

Reviews

[Frantzuu]

Great flow, heart and soul in felt in this piece, great rhymes, awesome piece of write. :D

[lamia]

nice poem , i like it because the emotions here are strong and it has a good flow of words.

[LL2]

I like this one the best.

[Mistaken]

Wow. I'm just amazed at this poem.. its beautiful.

The truth on how you can't let go of your past and the resentment of all mistakes made shines through immensly...