Ode to Rain

Freely falling

watering the worlds flowers

if only it could fall longer

seconds, minutes, even hours

 

natural music

a gentle tune

pouring down

it ends too soon

 

sweet condensation

blankets the sky

the most lovely pattern

to the naked eye.

Reviews

[J.S. Pua]

great imagery..
well-written..
nice poem..

[PaperHearts]

Wow! What a great write! It's actually raining over here right now where I live, so I can totally understand where you're coming from with this. Haha, I loved the imagery that you created, and the way you incorporated all of the different senses into expressing one subject. This brought a smile to my face. :)
~PaperHearts

[Abdul Aziz]

Brilliant imagery. I like the fact that you've tried to keep the poem short. But if you were writing in such rich vein, it wouldn't have hurt to add a few more stanzas! Rain always seems to bring out the best in poets. It is nice to see your take on it. Very well done :)

[*Always be Me:)*]

wow, this is amazing. nice work. :D

[Sasha]

I love the rain, so I can definitely appreciate this. The second stanza is my favorite. It's really simple but lyrical and has good imagery.

[Ishan Sadwelkar]

Wow.
Imagery is so serene.
You pulled of the moistness and calmness of rain
Very well.

Great Job

Ishan.

[zappy]

wow this is wonderful its really great