Insistent Noise

Some peoples words are always manufactured

Why would I object
And not let those words
Lie
Fabrication of moments
Crooked smiles in
Disguise
Yellowed teeth exit whispers
Cracked skin greys in the
Sun
Always lost in take moments
That we know before you've
Begun

Reviews

[Celie Rose]

I enjoyed your poem. Nicely written...Keep writing.

[LapseOfMind]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you for reading it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

those whispers from the yellowed teeth...probably in those there is truth...when words lie, the moments captured within them are false...or stilted.

this reminds me of why i like poetry that pours out naturally..and why i feel some poets adhere so much to form that the feeling gets lost somehow.

and their words are just noise.

excellent piece.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much. I've never been one to utilize form too much, i just write what's clawing it's way out. However it comes out, it is and I usually feel a lot better afterwards

[Lydia Shutter]

Do we create the moments of our lives or are they created for us? Interesting thoughts to ponder. Great imagery in your write. Lydi**

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. You create vision of fake face and few words of truth. I told my kids. No-one liked a liar. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you much, glad you enjoyed it

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Cassie]

Lovely lovely, you are a good writer

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much :)

[Philip Muls]

Manufactured words, fabricated moments. Great write.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you much, glad you enjoyed it