Jameson's Fire

The lyrics to a hip hop song I wrote and recorded some years back

Jameson's fire got me lit like a lighter / dynamite igniter better call a fire fighter / can you help me cuz I'm burning up inside / with a 3rd eye vision I'm livin downside / of reality be grabbin' me and draggin' me toward a tragedy / a travesty trying to stand free but the man be attacking me / it's sad to see a friendly enemy / offending me while defensive ends relent peace easily /

Speak easy when breezy treats breathin me / trees burnin peacefully easily easing me / into feeling free / no irritability ecstatically stabbing me / with negative gravity havin me

Hold
Drink
Think
Watch
Sink
Stink
Mold
Fold
Brink
Done in a blink
Hold

Drowning in the fire / Jameson's got the burn to swerve my mind slur my words churn my insides turn / ridin' highs bloodshot eyes no surprise / I'm addicted to my liquid prize / I'm ashed up, shoulda learned to survive / livin in this hive I need something to curb this strife / curve this knife nervous when I service this trite life / an addict with a habit that's had it this needs to stop / cuz I ignite like a matchstick, burning from the top / give me glass cuz I don't prefer the plastic / gotta have it, f**k rap s**t / give me a bottle so I can slam it / quite drastic, relying on senses that barely manage / damage done, this s**t used to be fun / now I'm done slum glum burnt up cashed out / now I'm on the way out

Author's Note

Wrote and recorded this quite a while back. I might upload a link if anyone wants to hear

Reviews

[J3ssInJupit3r]

Is this a rap/song? See I love these because they can so easily capture your anger. Much easier than a regular poem in my opinion. Do you make music too? I would like to hear it so that I can put music to the genious lyrics. I like how you didn't just stop at one thing rhyming together, you kept going as long as you could without stretching it or making it sound like it isn't supposed to be there. You kept it smooth and flowing. Seriously I loved this and I apologize for not getting to it sooner. Thank you for sharing this with me!

[LapseOfMind]

Yes this is a rap song. About 7 years back, roughly, I wrote and recorded this with a pretty awesome producer and another friend. It's home made, recorded in a closet so it's a little rough. Also, we were all a bit intoxicated. I plan on uploading it to YouTube or something, maybe do the lyrics with it then linking it to this site so anyone who wants to hear it, can. Thank you for your kind words and taking the time to read and review

[Celie Rose]

I really enjoyed your poem. I loved the rhythm and rhyme. The flow of emotion and words ignite.
expression raw and explosive. Well written. Keep writing!

[LapseOfMind]

Well thank you very much, I really appreciate it! Thank you for taking the time to read it and leave a review

[David Scott]

Feels raw. The song has a warm burn to it as well...
Lyrics fit the theme. Could even be blues.

[LapseOfMind]

I listen to it every so often and every time it takes me back to that time. A lot got let out when I wrote this

[Ashley Renegade]

Wow! Rhymes on point! This was awesome!

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much!! Glad that you enjoyed it!

[fierceauthor]

Okay Im loving this..I can honestly put a grasp of your flow on it !!! 1000 point ready

[LapseOfMind]

Wow, thank you very much!! Greatly appreciated!

[fierceauthor]

You deserve it

[jesserose99]

this was really good, i would love to hear it. intelligent doesn't begin to describe the way you crafted and weaved the words in these lyrics. amazing flow. i am at a lack for words.

[LapseOfMind]

Wow, thank you! I really appreciate that. I was intoxicated and depressed at a bar when I wrote it. Pretty intoxicated when I recorded it as well lol that was a pretty dark time. For whatever reason, when I'm depressed i find it much easier to write

[Aero]

definitely send me the link id love to hear it.

[LapseOfMind]

Will do, gotta upload it first. Dunno exactly how I'm going to go about doing that

[Aero]

i work in a studio, if you ever need help let me know

[LapseOfMind]

Sweet thanks! I need to find it on my computer first or upload it from my last remaining copy. After that I might either just upload it as a YouTube video or a downloadable Mp3

[McBear]

I loved it! I could see it being a very fast paced song

[LapseOfMind]

Surprisingly enough, it's a little bit slower. The producer who did the music made it kinda sad lol I got pretty good reviews on it though

[McBear]

I am very happy for you! :)