Figment Of

I got bored and wrote

Wandering mind, lost in the view
Surrendering to, non-linear time
Out of focus, eyes stuck in beyond
Can't keep on, crossed points of this locus
No spine to waste, imagine this ruse
Muscles refuse, lethargy that we taste
Hesitant oath, no words that we thread
Gravity overhead, slowing my growth

Reviews

[Cassie]

This dont seem like a poem you wrote while bored cos its written beautifully.

[LapseOfMind]

Well thank you!

[Tiffany K Charles]

Short. sweet. Complex. Very well executed love.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much!

[Reason4Rissa]

great poem, very big words. lol. but it was great. I can relate, and it was short and to the point, I like short and to the point :)
My Favorite part
"Wandering mind, lost in the view "

[LapseOfMind]

Lol well thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed it