Redemption

I read a book. It inspired this as I reflected over it.

As if it might rain, I gave you my sin
Your alphabet blade, filet open my skin
This contrary constant, constructing within
Salvation of soul, redeeming love - it begin
Mere child am I, fortuitous one
Cycles of cyphers, another lost son
Too much for coincidence, I see its begun
Like the moon in the twilight, your will it be done

Author's Note

I notice that a lot of my poems rhyme and are short. Here's another one.

Reviews

[Celie Rose]

I enjoyed reading your poem. Well written. Its a poem that makes you sit back and think. keep up the good work.

[Samuel Clayton]

I really like how your poems slide off the tongue very easily. They're beautifully written, and have deep meanings.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much, I appreciate it

[Reason4Rissa]

You asked me to review your writing so here is my review I didn't understand it, and that's ok it's your poem, so it's yi is own style not eveykne can understand

[LapseOfMind]

Lol well thank you

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As it is written "I am that I am", you are that you are...
I like this :)

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you much :)

[Karmee]

This is really amazing, I enjoyed this write.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much!

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words my friend..
"As if it might rain, I gave you my sin
Your alphabet blade, filet open my skin "
The opening lines. Honest, direct and feel of real life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[LapseOfMind]

I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work

[Coyote Poetry]

I always enjoy your work and you are welcome.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you good sir