Coalesce

This poem pretty much wrote itself

I could never stop running
A stones throw from a sham
With your blink in the darkness
I coalesced with flesh into man
A precarious whisper
So faint as I breath
This direction of starlight
Another trick up your sleeve
Do you always remember
Or am i here to forget
You showed me time was a river
And I'm caught in your net
I feel the sun in your valley
Life's light on my face
I could never stop running
And you've always gave chase

Author's Note

This is a poem.

Reviews

[Giulia King]

I really enjoyed reading this poem! It has a lovely flow :)

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)

[Celie Rose]

Enjoyed reading your poem. Awesome write. The words and rhythm flow smoothly..compliment each other. Felt like I was on a journey. Well written and expressed.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much, I appreciate it

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This flows like a river and was a pleasure to read, dear poet :) Awesome!

[LapseOfMind]

Well thank you very much, glad that you enjoyed it!

[An owl on the moon]

Reading your words, I felt as if walking on a ledge, the place of almost falling. The words took a path just out of reach. So powerful.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you, im glad that my words have been able to take you on a journey! Thank you for taking the time to read it

[Karmee]

Very nicely written write, I like your choice of words in part of this.
Amazing write

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave a review