Quick Cut

Just some verse I made up. I curse a couple times, beware

This soliloquy could literally be stealing me
My mind you see absent for rhymes that please
Never coming back as I hum this attack
And one thing I lack is intellectual property
I never properly introduced myself
Quite possibly I probably need to be
Back on the shelf
Do I need to add to this bleed sacrilege
Feed masochists some pacifists
F**k it I pass on this I'm past this s**t
Like pacific coast activists I'm actively acting
Reacting to that I'm not even active in
Activating these activities to be like a cavity
And get under your skin okay let me begin...
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Reviews

[Ashley Renegade]

Bruhhhh please tell me you are a rap battle regular! You are so good, and so fluent, and just yes.

[LapseOfMind]

lol I used to cypher with various camps down in Las Vegas and even used to freestyle in some bars for free drinks. Freestyle and writing is what used to get me through crazy times

[Ashley Renegade]

I get that. Sometimes I start writing some lyrics or a poem, and I don't even realize what I'm writing until it's everything I feel on paper.

[A.L.]

So I guess the question is, have you begun?

[LapseOfMind]

Not even close lol

[A.L.]

Well it seems you have a word to keep. Get going LapseofMind! :)

[LapseOfMind]

Lol sadly enough I'm stifled by a mood. I have "to be in the mood" to let words out sad to say. Otherwise my mind is blank

[A.L.]

Well I suppose it is good you are in a pleasant mood. Although pain and sadness tends to lead to amazing poetry, I'm glad you are not burdened by it at the moment.

[LapseOfMind]

It comes and goes when it pleases, most of the time I'm a real chipper person. I do have ways to dip into a melancholy state, which I use to write. Maybe tomorrow night I'll do that lol

[A.L.]

The curiosity that is trying to escape my lips is how come you can only write about melancholy things? Is your life solely made up of dreary events and feelings?

[LapseOfMind]

Nope, my life is an even balance of both negative and positive. When I'm happy, which is most days, I don't have any inspiration for some reason. I put myself into a melancholy state so I can writr

[A.L.]

Ah I see. Well I guess you have it balanced perfectly.

[LapseOfMind]

lol I don't know about perfectly

[A.L.]

None of us are. No worries, your balancing life's crazy rather well from what I've picked up on. Non-perfectly but hey who is? ;)

[LapseOfMind]

Hah! No one! All we can do is strive for balance I guess

[A.L.]

Seems so, doesn't it?

[LapseOfMind]

Indeed. Then again, who are we to know?

[A.L.]

It's merely our place to try our best and not get caught in the chaos of the world.

[FreedomFighter]

I liked that each line got more and more intense, good work here

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much