Alternate Gravity

Just another poem

So desperate I find myself
Lonely as I sink below
Lost and entangled
Stuck in the grasp of your gravity
As you stand above
I find that my
Hands remain grasping
For what I know can never be
Your eyes, the sun
My moon is eclipsed
By the heavens above
I'm trapped by the draw of your energy
How can I slow
This pull that you bring
When I can't be transparent
Stuck in this focused reality
It's your eyes when we meet
That enslaves my gaze
And the light that you bring
That is the key to my cage

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Cages and questions. Who knows the answer.
"It's your eyes when we meet
That enslaves my gaze
And the light that you bring
That is the key to my cage "
I liked the ending. We can be saved by a kind word and friendship. Many kinds of cages. I enjoyed this poem. You made me think this night. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ashley Renegade]

You never disappoint. Your poems keep getting better and better. Your words are concise and purposeful, and yet fluid and moving. Beautiful as always.

[LapseOfMind]

Thank you very much, I really appreciate that

[Giulia King]

A very deep, meaningful poem :) Loved reading it!

[LapseOfMind]

I appreciate that, thank you :)

[BlakHeart]

love your poem

It's your eyes when we meet
That enslaves my gaze
those lines are just simply amazing :)

[LapseOfMind]

Well thank you very much, I appreciate that