Loki is our Beverage of Choice

New Words: Loki (god of mischief), nirvana, beatific, divine, sprinkle, desseminate, puerile, antic, shenanigans, levity, trifling, solar, cosmos,

 

 

Renne's that We are Loki flows in our camp and pack..

chasing nirvana, disseminating as many bottles in levity.

Sprinkle a little here, divine a need there.Whats a trifling bottle of purile alcohol along with the antics of a few believers.Shenanigans playing on trifling  faith, the Godshead's Solar confluense, His cosmos tricked and sprinkled with liquid Mirth

Reviews

[LinBin]

your words are like a fruity red wine, very nice to swallow x

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is off the wall, yet beautiful in its mischievousness.

[Lily Mae]

I haven't heard shenanigans used in awhile..:) I love the feel this has of ancient ceremony..the kind where you'd celebrate anything just to have some Loki.. :) xx Godshead Solar confluence, liquid Mirth.. all explosive...xx

[Chris]

We need flaws or we'ld make them up...oh we DID make them - if not up then definitely sideways... As I remember - mischeviousness was not just malevolent or evil... it denoted play and pranks and innocence - seeking smiles and laughing at oneself. So yes, I would choose Loki as well.

Well said Laury.

Take care,
Chris

[Muse]

I've read two poems today about Loki, the God of mischief...
I guess alchohol can be blamed for his craziness, eh? Well penned, and a very creative write.

[Ruth]

Absolutely spins me! Brilliant! Good gods....LOVE this:)
I shall have a case of that and spurn a few tales around the mischief! lol
Brilliant love
xx

[Poetic Beauty]

I like this piece. It is almost comical but not quite. I enjoyed the antics in this poem. Great write.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Interesting and great use of metaphors. Nicely done. Great Write!

[Marie Harrison]

Perfection!

[Raven Starhawk]

Spectacular and stunning. I love how you weaved this into a potent gem.