I like the rhyming (again) and I like the way you've described the way dandelions can survive through winter. I like
'I don't see what's so wrong with us, flowers have no need,
And yet the people hate me so, because I am a weed.'
Those lines sort of stood out the most and made the poem what it is.
A little question:
On the third line,
'So delicate, and beautiful, there perfect through and through'
Is it meant to be 'there' or 'they're'? because 'they're' would make more scene (to me), but of course, this is your poem and you might have meant 'there', and I have just misunderstood it.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
It's they're, but my gramar check told me otherwise! lol, I hate autocorect!
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