Hair

Inspiration for poetry left and right :)

her hair contains stories

of all the times

she thought she was a 

barber

and chopped it up

snip snip

and when she learned to

french braid

twist twist

but most of all

when she fastened

the veil to the

crown of her head

and let it curtain her face

Author's Note

I would really appreciate your opinion on my poetry :)

Reviews

[Alyssa Case]

OMIGOD that is so cute and sweet and I want to just omigod wow I love the way you added the italicized parts and the way it told "stories" that's so cute

[annabellee]

At first I didn't know what to expect at first, certainly didn't expect such a creative, good poem.
Great imagery and I loved the snip, snip and twist, twist part.
and I loved the ending.
Well done :)

[Latifa]

i like the sni snip and twist twist

[bobc]

l...yes...a very nice piece. Really liked the opening. Made me smile...bobc

[zainul]

I am very impressed to read your nice piece on hair.

[Vyse Cross]

A vivid display of metaphors of which one can relate to.