Please Say

Please say we're okay,

I only wait for a phrase

to define what we are,

to begin our new days.

We know that we are different

Than the ones who came before.

But why can't we risk it?

And end up being more?

Author's Note

I'm sorry for sharing such pitiful poem because I can't scribble good thoughts lately. I'm not confident about this, though. Criticisms are not an ultimatum. Enjoy! :)

Reviews

[William Arthur]

always risk it! and never settle for being 'okay'!

[ANTO]

I think this is a lovely brief write filled with yearning Leann.

I don't think theres a need for the two question marks at the end - perhaps just after '...more?' since you've joined the last two lines with 'And '.

No... this is good. :)

[Emily]

I love this one!
Keep it up!!

[sereenaoutloud]

This was really good, it flows beautifully and i like the last line "end up being more?"
Love it! :)

[Jamestown]

WELL DONE!Short sweet and raw emotions!
I really enjoyed this piece of poetry,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Apple Green Sprite]

Thank you very much Jamestown! Glad you liked it. :)

[andrew mitchell]

I enjoyed the way you worded this write with your thoughts , it flowed so nicely!!

[Apple Green Sprite]

I enjoyed reading your review as well. Thanks to that, andrew! :)

[Lavender Soya]

Short yet potent. Nicely done Miss. You sure have your way with words. Please know that this poem is not pitiful at all. Keep them coming! :-)

[Apple Green Sprite]

your words are encouraging. Thank you Lavender Soya! :)