The Luck of the Heart

They did this to me...

Im hurting in ways that are inconsiderable.
Im miserable in ways that are criminal.
Thinking of taking my mind off it is unthinkable,
Yet thinking about it is intangible. 

Do you sit back and laugh at what you have done?
Do you think that you have the game and have won?
Well, if you use your mind and think in the long run,
I am who you made me to be, because I am the one.

You have killed me many times in your head.
You are too smart to not have already read
all the things that I have wanted to do instead.
Yet I should have been too smart to be misled.

Am I getting too poetic for you my dear?
Are things that were once foggy, becoming clear?
I do hope so; if they have please give me a cheer.
While you continue to run over me,
                               �"At least hand me a beer.

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

I feel this. The questions that you ask anf the silence that replies, the no off swithch for your thoughts and all the ifs and buts in between.
When you think about relationships, you often come to the conclusion its amazing we arent extinct already.
Love the last line. I think thats known as comedic irony :)
I like your writing style. Free and nothing forced. Keep penning. (is that a word? Well it should be. Why am I writing my thoughts in brackets? Okay stop.... After three then, 1, 2, 3... Aargh, help me) :)

[Blu]

cute - I like the image forming in my head