Crying Skin

I swim through
broken glass
treading and making waves
of thickening mirk
your hand stirs
the pot I am in
as there is nothing
to soothe my crying skin

Reviews

[Llysofar]

This is an amazing piece of work. i have just re-read it after a few months away, and it's till as powerful as ever, even better for being short and to the point.
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[Kyle]

Reading this I felt pain and abandonment, I wish I could have reached out to pull you free. A writing of great emotion. Excellent!!!!!

[James K. Blaylock]

Wow, this was very powerful indeed!