I WANT IT BACK

IM I ALONE

WELL SOMTIMES IT SEEMS THAT WAY

WHEN YOUR NOT AROUND MY DAYS ARE NIGHT

YOU BROUGHT THE SUN APON MY LIFE

THEN YOU TOOK IT BACK AGIAN

MY HEART IS SOMETHING I WANT BACK

BUT ITS IN YOUR HANDS NOW

I ASK YOU PLZ DONT BREAK IT

IT WILL BREAK ME....

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

not bad for a short piece. keep on writing.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

short but meaningful poem.....nice work:)