Genie

hello number 5 =)

You were a person number 1,

you were sure that you had won.

I fulfilled your wish, not one but three

but you ate your word, you didn't set me free.

I was sad, but there were you

my precious person number 2.

You were so kind and sweet to me

but end up hanging off the tree.

Just when I was drinking tea

appeared a stranger number 3.

I must admit we had much fun

but it all ends with silver gun.

You, a nasty human number 4

came when you were loosing in a war.

I was a demon, weapon, nothing more

and yet I couldn't take your soul.

Thousand years and more have passed

I'm waiting for the number last.

Laughing in the depths of sea, alive

I'm waiting just for you, a victim number 5,

you're reading this, oh don't be shy!

(¬‿¬)

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

the formal structure of this poem and the rhyming give this poem a certain credence. let's hope no5 never arrives!!!

[matrixmark]

This was quite good I have to say.. A little bit of mystery along with great rhymes.

The usage of wording is enterianing and fun. The ending was really cool - wrapped this piece up nicely.

As for being number 5 - no thanks I'd rather stay alive.

Mark.

[Lero Ro]

oh please Mark, don't be shy just accept your fate and the genie and noone is getting hurt XD
just kidding, thanks for your review! :)

[matrixmark]

No worries - a cool piece but I won't be number 5....lol

Mark.