Who

I don't know who I am,

I'm lost underneath all this pain.

You took away my happiness,

so you call this your game.

Sleeping is for the strong,

I just need time to think all this through.

My smile hides all my pain,

no one knows how much I really need their help.

I've attempted the end,

but my suffering has become too strong.

I am now a robot

of my own sadness,

following orders as they come.

Reviews

[Lindsey]

A very saddening poem. great piece. i love the way you captured so much feeling in such a short piece. that takes talent.

[Rachel Landes]

Well put. Really captures the moment!

[Pyyro]

Very well done. Just the right kind of dark to it. It's like the poem calls to me because that is what I am pretty much now