Baby, the pain

a little poem ^_^ so glad to be back on here

The pain came to her,

so hard,

for so long she felt,

it had turned into nothing.

Emptiness,

loneliness,

numbness.

She felt nothing at all,

but the blood

that was flowing from her wrists.

The red gave her power,

it showed her she was in control.

How she was in control

for the very first time.

Reviews

[conversations with her ..]

I really enjoyed this poem, and I’m looking forward to reading more of your pieces. I'm kind of new on here and it would be an honor if you can review my 4 new recent poems. (The world is ours, Nostalgia, Paradise, and You)

Thank you and Keep up the Good work!

[Solitary_Streets]

Great little piece! short and to the point, it's great and I love this kind of writing. good job keep it up