Self Portrait

"I am Lexi"

I am messy hair

I am many scribbles

I am foggy stares

I am murky eyes

I am murky mind

I am 4/5 sugar

I am 1/5 spice

I am iced mocha

I am pen between teeth

I am Venus

I am "just breathe"

I am ocean waves

I am tall pines

I am Cassiopeia

I am 7:00 pm skies

"I am Lexi"

I am up until 3

I am 10,000 thoughts and

I am beginning

-l.r.

Reviews

[Misery]

A creative portrait of 'self'. Nicely worded, dear poet.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Misery]

Much welcome.

[Emily]

I love it! It's so cute!
Keep it up!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Justin Xavier Smith]

I remember writing poems like this. The whole point is to come up with really creative and unique imagery, and I think for the most part you've done that here.
Side note, where'd you get Cassiopeia? That's a character in one of my novels lol

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you! And I used Cassiopeia because it's a constellation and I'm really fascinated in astronomy and stuff like that, and also, it is named after a powerful woman in Greek mythology so I thought it was fitting for this!

[Justin Xavier Smith]

It works perfectly. Nice!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[ZDMusgrove]

It absolutely lovely. It is a self-portrait painted in words. It is a very brilliant idea. Keep up the good work, and I am looking forward to reading more works.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much!

[Nessie_AJ]

I love how the title makes you think it's something so basic, and then you wrote something that is so different and nicely written.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Falling Leaf.]

Simple and innocent. Not much to say because not much to change about a poem that lists your qualities. Nice write.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you.

[Ana B.]

Lovely work, with genuine curiosity, honesty and innocence. :)

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you:)

[A Ghost of Myself]

The self Portrait, open, honest, and leaves little room for interpretation . . . I am? A question many fail to ask themselves, and often times people lie to themselves. It take someone content in their being to say, this is me, love it or hate it, but this is me.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you for your review.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Unique way of describing yourself, never the less I like different :)
Brilliant little piece you have here.
Keep on writing :)

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

No worries

[Justin]

that was really great :) :) it was extremely creative how you were able to describe yourself!!!! great job :)

[Lexi Richard]

Thanks, Justin!

[Justin]

your welcome, anytime, keep it uP :)