On Love

at times it's sweet

like caramel

and i smile like a doll

but other times 

i am so weak

like i'm about to fall

days are either black or white

they flicker like a film

i'm constantly caught in-between

an ice age or a kiln

sometimes i want

to leave it all

to forget what i have been

but i know that it will hunt me down

and then be sweet again

-l.r.

Reviews

[D.T.]

I really, really, really love this! It's so beautiful and descriptive. It's also true, love is one thing one day, then something else the next. Great job!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Abilash Uttama]

i loved the contrast, love indeed is tricky. nice piece!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[I Am Svetlana]

I feel like this all the time when it comes to my relationship. Hot one day, ice cold the next. It's as if you ask yourself: 'where's the balance?' Very bipolar, opposite.

[Lexi Richard]

Exactly, love is a tricky thing.

[R Smith]

Great write Lexi, its hard to decide sometimes about love, try to escape it and it comes right back, I love that line 'an ice age or a kiln' an inspired rhyme, truly worthy of the highest praise, very well done :)

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much!

[Jamestown]

Very well written, I enjoyed reading this!
The thought behind this his piece is very clever and true as well,
Love is definitely a tricky game, no doubt,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!