Lost Where I Belonged

Lately I

Have come to hate

The days without the sun

I'm tired of dwelling amongst the rain

And darkness I've grown to love

I used to crave

The misty days

Thick with fog and dew

I once was closed off on my own

With a head of blue

Now I see,

At almost eighteen,

Where I had gone wrong,

While I was wallowing in my thoughts

I lost where I belonged

-l.r.

Reviews

[Annie Nicole]

I absolutely adore this Lexi! It's like you took the words from my own mind! haha. I really could connect to this! Love it!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Tasteless Heart]

Another very well composed piece. Your talent for creating vivid imagery shines in this poem. Thanks for sharing

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much!

[Sandra Nair]

Really nice and happy to see the last few lines. Great!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Sandra Nair]

It's my pleasure.

[PoeticChico]

I think your poem it's great, I happy to see this style of writing. so fresh and fluid...

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Emily]

I love that first stanza!
Keep it up!!

[Lexi Richard]

Thanks, Emily!

[Jess]

You're use of rhymes is amazing. I love this. Amazing.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much.