Gentle

A little ditty about a perfect day

Ray of light

Glistening through the leaves

 

Leaves me feeling a sense

Of wonder

 

Wondering what I'll do

On a day so beautiful

 

Swim in the lake

Walk in the parks

Lay in your arms

Stare at the stars

Get lost in a dream

Go fishing in yonder stream

 

All of it with you

My one

My love

My only you

Reviews

[Jenny Davis]

This is so beautiful...I loved how you ended one line with a word and then started the new line with that word...very cool...this was a sweet thing to read, thank you! :)



PS- Don't know what's up with the ratings...I hit 100 and it came out much less, so I deleted my review and re-did it...sorry :(

[Rain]

This is a beautiful, uncomplicated poem of love and wonderment. It left me with a happy feeling. I needed to read something like this. Rain..

[None]

Love makes everything so much better. Our eyes open and we can see things we never noticed. Even housework gets better! Your poem really is "Gentle" and brings to mind carefree days and beauty. Your use of nature and love make this such a special poem.

[empty glances]

Very simple and pretty and innocent, nice work. By the way, thanks for your review.

[Spoken]

A beautiful perfect day out enjoying the wonders of nature with the one you love. Definately a day to remember. Great romantic write.

[Andrea A. Wentz]

Full of innocence, wonder, and love. Beautiful write Lex. Thank you for the read request. :)

[Yvonne Heidt]

How utterly innocent and sweet this is!

Wonderful job.

[April Child]

Lovely, does sound like a perfect day. Grab it and do all of the above! Enjoyed the feeling of peace in this poem.