Promises

Maybe I didn’t love you enough

Else, you would have fought for me

Maybe i wasn’t worth the fight..

Else, you would have kept your word



Your promises of being together

To bring the stars down for me..

Your promises of traveling together,

To see the beauty of the places holding hands ..

Maybe we were never meant to be,

Else, we would have tried harder

Maybe we were meant to be,

Else, our story wouldn’t have been inked for the world to see ..

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[kaz]

Bravo!! Absolutely wonderful piece. One thing that poetry is great at that other forms of writing aren't is its ability to transfer emotions so purely, you're poetry is a great example of that!

[Lijo Jose]

Awwhh.. Thankyou so much.... Your words mean @ lot.. Have a happy Sunday dear. :)