suffocated

Sitting here thinking...
Thinking of all the things you've said,
and all the things I didn't get the chance to say.
I drowned in your eyes,

and suffocated on your smile.
right now, I cant breather.
It hurts so much.
I wont glorify it,
its a kind of death,
only...
I was forced to keep living

Reviews

[TheBlackExorcist]

thankyou and honestly, I dont see what i write as poems, I dont know what they are, poems was the main one that made sense

[J.Arthur.B]

liked, really good end.
the 2nd and the 3rd line make me think this was a common poem, I will suggest to change it, you have a really good poem here and those line are not at the same level than the rest.