She's Not A Drama Queen

a poem i randomly came up with one day on the bus. it kind of reflects my life *shrug* i guess. its more of just to vent and get stuff out of my head. doesn't really have a deep meaning to it.

Why does she want to Cry?
Maybe it's becuase of the Stress, of the Tests,
She goes through the peer Pressure,
With her mind set on the Fresher future.
But she can't forget about that Time,
that the kid told her to take the Dime,
so she could buy a new Personality,
thinking he was a Smartie.
So maybe that's why she Cries,
Becuase, inside she really Dies.

Author's Note

how is my first poem on here?

Reviews

[Changed to a New Accoun..]

nice work i liked the last line i can really realte to it

[Gav Mac]

not a bad attempt at a first poem. It has substance and i think anyone who was bullied at school could probably relate to it. Look forward to seeing more poems. thanks for sharing.