So suddenly bereft

She's pulled a Tatiana
and the empty yawns below
Brought me here and left
as subjective feelings rage
No weigh inelltoelper
and I canna turn the page

Reviews

[Gandré]

This was a difficult one for me. I understood suddently lost. but.. inelltoelper - looking what Narnie said...but can't find anything. I understand a semi-sentimental feeling from a moment heraus - taken from a moment now here. tell me when u get a chance.
thanks also for ... genocide poem - well i calleed it so. for what they do... in a huge picture with humanity, they do exactly this. no freedoms less and less and buying, consuming, ruling and you know all that rest. thx Donald tell hello to our friend. how is she? I have to find her.

[Narnie]

inelltoelper... I bet it didn't stop you wanting to though. Is this the first Ive read tonight with your colloquial dialect in it? I think so... your accent is so strong that maybe it just breezes through me now unnoticed.

[Legion]

inelltoelper - interloper perhaps? Is that the word you wanted to use?

Anyway, not exactly sure of this piece's meaning, but I like the frostyness I get off of it when I read it. It has an elegance to it in its wording. Bravo!