Absorbtion Squeezed In

A Cross Tick

Slip away for a moment
Into yourself
Listen to life�s sounds fade into fog
Kin to a hawk sighting possible prey
Awareness sliding into focus
Gaining momentum as you sink
Aspirations of creation
Inspiration raising neck hairs
Such is the way of selfish
Transferring feelings to thought
Making believe for the joy
Younger and older at once
Can this be held for the nonce
Held in contentment lazily lax
Even as sweet Summer rain
Ever adance on smoky glass pane
Ken ye the source of my pain?

Reviews

[Gandré]

beautiful lyrical poetry with psychological aspect - the ending suprised. "Making believe for the joy
Younger and older at once
Can this be held for the nonce " -------you often have this component in your poetry everything is transcient and you look back.. I love when you do it. I totally enjoyed your new poem and thanks for taking time to review my new poem "My summer just slipped by" be well, donald.