Movements

Movements

A Poem by Donald Meikle
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Between Snow shoveling assignments (doncha just love that fluffy white stuff?)

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Music moves me.
I know it's supposed to.
Some irritates me
I know it's supposed to.
Not being able to read it
Or write it
Has not stopped me from judging it
I know I'm supposed to
My paintings have been displayed
To move people
Some probably irritate people
They are not supposed to
I enjoy listening to blues
Cannot write them
Without being sad
Cannot be sad listening to them
Some classic (what's the plural of opus?)
Make tears form as I listen
Others keep me content
Once in a while skat slips in
To give me a bonus
Music moves me.
I guess it's supposed to.

© 2008 Donald Meikle


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There's a great musicality to this poem, excuse the pun, you show a great talent in using sound. The flow is wonderful and I think this mainly because its not impeded by punctuation. I don't think it matters if you can:

Not being able to read it
Or write it

Music is spiritual. But more than that, I have a friend who can't read music and is, so she says, a superb singer; my uncle can't read or write at all, but can play music. I love music for the lyrics alone. I'm tone deaf and I wouldn't be able to play it at all.
And painting, you really show what a creative person you are here. I like the references to your painting.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Ahhh!! I so relate to this...I am musically inept but I have the soul of friggin' Mozart!! What wonderful truthes lay here and I so agree with them.......thanks for sharing!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Thank you for sharing with us this feeling, you are right, it is supposed so, for all life is music! I also wrote about this, remember my pieces Music I. ; Music II. ; and Music III. ? Lol wonderful poem !

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on December 31, 2008

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Donald Meikle
Donald Meikle

Halifax, MA



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Liverpool born,USNavy vet. Enjoying first marriage. three daughters, (two bathrooms) one until they left. (a tree that loves me) Poet thru geneology) Scot Irish. Living in New England more..