shivers

Ashes adrift in cold breezy whispers
Mesmerized Monday finally seen

So I sat here/there fingers achingly tapless over blurred keys.
Wetly wondering in salted moving air...
Clouds huddle together crowding for position-
avoiding the ever sinking sun
Welcoming darkness impatient in the wings....

Soon .....well soon enough words would dribble-
dropping double entendres in croissant swirls.


Darting and daring to form movements
creating caresses to shiver-

shudder tingle spine touches...
tuning vibrating space in distant time
timely distance

springing to spark the awe of appreciation
begging for light to guide them

Reviews

[famine7659]

nice style but you loose me near the end.

[R J Askew]

LIke 'clouds huddle together crowding for position' and 'Welcoming darkness impatient in the wings'. Got metaphoric drama and movement there.